Sunday, 14 November 2010

Sallow Place by Tara Glickman

The anemone meets the vague warmness of your springtime air,
though the streets are full of turning meat and trees of fruit are bare.
He lowers his omniscient arms and tickles heaven and grass,
while hungry dogs and babes alike ferment to their last.

The solitary god, tired as the moon is wasted in your place,
graces your belligerent youth and dusts their candid shoulders
with his cool and foreboding old man’s whiskers
and dresses the British skyline with his royal brace.

Willow, you move as though time waits—
as though children grow to men and
beasts, too, have a special spot
that your wise whiskers can tickle.

Trees suffocate in your whispery willow manner
and boys and men turn to dust while you,
lonely hermit, look down at the rest of the sealife:
to you they are not just lewd and dissonant,
to you they are colourful and prolific,
more than their lackadaisical mock misery,
they are like autumn leaves still soft
(though maybe a bit gnarled and soused).

You nod slow when the wind tuts at your sentimentality;
she tries to uproot you and feed the absent Eden of your planet,
planting sallow seeds around your swollen god’s thumb
as you (not listening) and the Earth remain one.

Posted to OneStopPoetry for their One Shot Wednesday initiative. Check it out at http://oneshotpoetry.blogspot.com/

5 comments:

  1. this again was a strong write...i am glad you shared Tara's work...the following stanza though was great and world have worked just as well as a poem on its own

    Trees suffocate in your whispery willow manner
    and boys and men turn to dust while you,
    lonely hermit, look down at the rest of the sealife:
    to you they are not just lewd and dissonant,
    to you they are colourful and prolific,
    more than their lackadaisical mock misery,
    they are like autumn leaves still soft
    (though maybe a bit gnarled and soused).

    Thanks for sharing with One Shot

    Cheers

    Pete

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  2. A captivating write with wonderful imagery.

    Anita

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  3. Many interesting puns, references, and allusions. Enjoyed your poem.

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  4. Tara -I love the images from nature
    it is piece with alot to reflect on
    I would love to see each stanza become a poem that is joined under one theme

    thanks for sharing with One Shot - hope to read more

    Moon smiles

    P.S. Thanks Adam

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  5. Great images, images that are metaphors, metaphors that meet allusions, allusions meeting illusions and the wrap is cosmic. Interesting write, not easy, but interesting. Well done. Gay @beachanny

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