Thursday, 10 November 2011

Backyard Fruits, a poem by Adam White, poet

Re-post of an oldie, edited for your reading pleasure.

The sunshine,
A warm tingle on a cold morning
As we expose ourselves to the air,
To wander, hand in hand, steadily
Up the uneven, winding garden path.

Blades tickle
At the arches of our naked feet.
Surrounded by the flowering buds
Of hardy, chill blossoms in bright bloom,
All ripest pinks and gentle winter blues.

We are hot,
And we go to pluck sweet, backyard fruits,
Succulent and sapid on my lips.
A luscious and delectable sin,
Denied to us since the summer months.

So sated,
Bellies full of it, we head back in,
Away from the garden's forbidden yield,
Where the cool of fresh sheets call out to us,
Balmy, pleasing and kind to tender skin.

22 comments:

  1. Hmm, I would guess that there are all manner of backyard fruits to be stolen. All the sweeter for the pilfering, I'd say. ;-)

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  2. Oh to be warm... even in a dream. Lovely poem with beautiful imagery. Thank you.

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  3. Erotic sensuous and lucious :-) Beautifully written

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  4. nice. i like the barefoot...and the swiping of fruit, so sated...think goes well beyond what is on the tree...nice one shot!

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  5. Despite your always clean and modern language, which I envy, you've managed to invest this with quite a Shakespearean feel, or that of an old sonnet in a victorian tome somewhere--lush, measured and enchanting, taking us out of a nasty steamy hustling world into a very private garden. Loved it, Adam.

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  6. All ripest pinks and gentle winter blues...loved the subtle sensuality in your writing adam

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  7. very sensous feel to this one..nice

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  8. I join hedgewitch Adam,i felt this Elegance in your post..warmth is always a delight to feel,especially with sunlight all around..beautiful poem :)

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  9. A lot of wonderful word pictures here. Love the grass tickling the arches of your feet.

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  10. "to dream in sweet peace again" Brilliant poem, Adam... "Succulent and sapid on my lips," is one example of many well-crafted phrases. Cheers

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  11. Words like smells, can take you back in time - your words allowed me to fly back many years, and enjoy some wonderful memories... I enjoyed your poem! Cheers, Dave

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  12. oh man, this is such a wonderful warming feel good poem. very sunny!

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  13. very emphatic - i was tingled, and tickles :D

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  14. So sensuous - I loved this reading this poem - such perfect nostalgia

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  15. hi adam..read this twice...why coz i loved the first read..and then went back for more!!!..really enjoyable poem...have a great Christmas and new Year and thanks for your support...Pete

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  16. This makes wish for spring! Great piece as always, Adam. I love the line....Blades tickle at the arches of our naked feet...Great one shot. I truly this poem!

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  17. i love this! my comment a cliche, but true ~ forbidden fruits are all the sweeter.

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  18. cool poem seems like a gorgeous escapade almost sinful but returning to the safety and comfort of a cool bed ...thank you for sharing x x x

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  19. Nice repost, adam. Well worth a second read and more.

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