The sunshine,
A warm tingle on a cold morning
As we expose ourselves to the air,
To wander, hand in hand, steadily
Up the uneven, winding garden path.
Blades tickle
At the arches of our naked feet.
Surrounded by the flowering buds
Of hardy, chill blossoms in bright bloom,
All ripest pinks and gentle winter blues.
We are hot,
And we go to pluck sweet, backyard fruits,
Succulent and sapid on my lips.
A luscious and delectable sin,
Denied to us since the summer months.
So sated,
Bellies full of it, we head back in,
Away from the garden's forbidden yield,
Where the cool of fresh sheets call out to us,
Balmy, pleasing and kind to tender skin.
Hmm, I would guess that there are all manner of backyard fruits to be stolen. All the sweeter for the pilfering, I'd say. ;-)
ReplyDeleteOh to be warm... even in a dream. Lovely poem with beautiful imagery. Thank you.
ReplyDeleteErotic sensuous and lucious :-) Beautifully written
ReplyDeletenice. i like the barefoot...and the swiping of fruit, so sated...think goes well beyond what is on the tree...nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteDespite your always clean and modern language, which I envy, you've managed to invest this with quite a Shakespearean feel, or that of an old sonnet in a victorian tome somewhere--lush, measured and enchanting, taking us out of a nasty steamy hustling world into a very private garden. Loved it, Adam.
ReplyDeleteAll ripest pinks and gentle winter blues...loved the subtle sensuality in your writing adam
ReplyDeletevery sensous feel to this one..nice
ReplyDeleteI join hedgewitch Adam,i felt this Elegance in your post..warmth is always a delight to feel,especially with sunlight all around..beautiful poem :)
ReplyDeleteA lot of wonderful word pictures here. Love the grass tickling the arches of your feet.
ReplyDelete"to dream in sweet peace again" Brilliant poem, Adam... "Succulent and sapid on my lips," is one example of many well-crafted phrases. Cheers
ReplyDeleteWords like smells, can take you back in time - your words allowed me to fly back many years, and enjoy some wonderful memories... I enjoyed your poem! Cheers, Dave
ReplyDeleteoh man, this is such a wonderful warming feel good poem. very sunny!
ReplyDeletevery emphatic - i was tingled, and tickles :D
ReplyDeleteops, i meant tickled
ReplyDeleteSo sensuous - I loved this reading this poem - such perfect nostalgia
ReplyDeletehi adam..read this twice...why coz i loved the first read..and then went back for more!!!..really enjoyable poem...have a great Christmas and new Year and thanks for your support...Pete
ReplyDeleteThis makes wish for spring! Great piece as always, Adam. I love the line....Blades tickle at the arches of our naked feet...Great one shot. I truly this poem!
ReplyDeletei love this! my comment a cliche, but true ~ forbidden fruits are all the sweeter.
ReplyDeletecool poem seems like a gorgeous escapade almost sinful but returning to the safety and comfort of a cool bed ...thank you for sharing x x x
ReplyDeleteNice repost, adam. Well worth a second read and more.
ReplyDeleteNice and sweet :)
ReplyDeleteFantastic!
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