Monday, 21 March 2011

Bleak Hours by Adam White, poet

Time keeps arresting itself.
Each second delivering
Some new, humanising stroke
Of the sharp, satirising blade.

How should the next turn come?
The trilling of the telephone,
The despairing knock at the door,
The bad news rushing on undelayed.

Little agonies for me to swim through.
I'm left unsure what platitude to deliver,
Since (uncommonly) the pain is not my own.
You would think I'd be well versed.

Weeping over the driest gears,
I force sympathetic eyes to beam
And appreciate the run of bad luck
With which you seem to be cursed.

Black streaks flit through the air.
You deliver hurtful rhetoric,
Unreasonable blame strikes hot,
Sleep will follow for too tired minds.

Ignorant, wet noses search,
Blind to this toxic reality.
Kibble spills, tingling in to a bowl,
Happy, your wide mouths grind.

Posted for One Shot Wednesday at http://www.onestoppoetry.com
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8 comments:

  1. Profound, I love the imagery in your words Adam. Excellent.

    Anita.

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  2. So many of life's moments are intermingled with despair you present it so well Adam - you make it living and in so doing there is a way to face it.

    Thanks for the One Shot support my friend

    Smiles - MDW

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  3. A complex (in the best sense) and involving poem. Had me riveted.

    Lady Nyo

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  4. arf, arf...its a hard world...and your words poke us in the eye with it...

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  5. captivating piece Adam...

    ...rob kistner
    Image & Verse

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  6. Gorgeous imagery - it 'spoke' to me

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  7. Hi Adam

    Its so vivid and captivating... I liked it a lot... from the beginning your words like ...
    'Some new, humanising stroke
    Of the sharp, satirising blade.'
    Captured my thoughts...
    Thanks for sharing..

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
    http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com/2011/03/whispers-seed-and-senseless-living.html
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