Monday, 4 April 2011

You Were Right (About Some Things) a poem by Adam White, poet

I am pretty good, though
probably destined to be
The poorest sibling of all,
Yet I'm happy. I'm childless,
Far away, cold and creative.

My own sister calls me mysterious.
Does that mean she doesn't know me?
Do I pass like sand through the fingers,
No better than a whitening lie,
Or a secret bullet on the wind.

I whisper a missive to the sky.
My parents didn't meet her.
A mess in her torn up dress,
Relatively nice singing voice,
Never pretty in her own way.

Three years in and I confess a sin.
You're shocked but supportive.
I make a little more sense I think,
But you still struggle to understand.
The slick fluid dries quick on my hand.

I am pretty good, though
I have my creaking flaws,
Noisier for my bending bones.
The weight is too much weight,
To release or bare alone.


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7 comments:

  1. Some wickedly sinful, almost disturbing undertones here...hints at so much, but the confession is the mystery...brilliant write that has wrecked havoc with my imagination...Bravo!

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  2. I second what Natasha says laying here thinking 'what on earth dis he confess' great words Adam

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  3. um yeah i am with them...wonderfully told, but...

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  4. mysterious indeed - love the visual of the sand passing through fingers and never pretty in her own way...
    goodness my imagination is reeling

    thanks Adam for the 1 Shot!

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  5. Mysterious....and interesting ...

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  6. You're one cool character, Adam. Great piece!

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  7. this was excellent...a great poem my friend..cheers pete

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