Poetry by Adam White, an English poet now moved to Montreal, Canada. Writer of poems in various forms. Free Verse, Sonnets, Triolets, Sestina, Haiku and others. You can follow me on Twitter at http://twitter.com/#!/AdamWhitePoet
hmmm - sounds delicious...smiles
i like the bright cherry tree. wish i could eat some cherries.
Sounds like a prelude to a delectation...
I love the colour contrast!
An imagistic and intriguing poem.
intimate fall - I like it :)
Well! I don't think I need to divulge where my mind ran to! ;) Potent little piece indeed!
very yummy,love it.;)
The DC cherry blossom trees are only so faintly pink, but my cherry blossom trees in Baltimore bore blossoms the color of pink sweetheart roses and as they bloom in clusters, there seemed to be fresh new bouquets every day those two weeks in spring. I wondered at the choice of stitches - couldn't decide if that made the poem rapacious or just passionate and urgent. As a woman (because I am) I might have preferred laces (not as in shoes but as in dirndl). Though that might have led to confusion. For Geisha, perhaps sashes -- hmmm?Lovely and delicious haiku as others have also said. Glad to see you here, Adam.
I can picture bright cherry as either something as simple as someone blushing, or something more perhaps a bit more 'complex.' Steamy little piece!
Very good write. Wasn't sure where it was going there- but all was quickly resolved and very effective. Thanks
Ahhhh. Beautiful, sensual.
if you are going to undress...pulling stitches sounds like a fun way to get there...smiles.
I think the word stitches made me smile so I prefer the word lace or buttons if you want a more sensual image.My share is here:http://everydayamazin.blogspot.com/2011/10/thoughts.html
I like the cherry tree & pale skin -- both configure.Hands pulling at stitches almost seems ravishing.thanks for sharing.
stitches would be ravishing. Masculine way of being sensual in this write.Great Write.
cherry ripe ~ brillLib
Love it, especially the cherry tree. Hey, where have you gone? Wanted to tell you that your banner at the bottom of my blog gets a click almost daily! Effective advertising! And, I'm back to blogging 2 x a week. Hope to read from you soon. Hope you're well.