Though I can sense it's awful fingers touch;
Not cruel, not evil, not unkind as such,
But creeping in to dye my thoughts unset.
Cascading light illuminates your face,
My memories warm, though you are cold to touch;
Not distant, callous, not selfish as such,
You've left me still, though, lonely in this place.
Sleeping, pallid, you're covered, then you're gone,
And soon I may forget your tender touch;
Not lost, abandoned, not spiteful as such,
Just pushed aside so I might soldier on.
Oh, my lost love, my swollen eyes are sore.
Our meagre home your coffin evermore.
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Sad and lovely....
ReplyDeletedang...our meager home your coffin...what a close to this adam...great depth of feeling...nice...
ReplyDeletemmmm... so heartbreaking! This poem was breathing taking and the way you expressed your self was beautiful.
ReplyDeleteamazing poem...
Very heartbreaking, but beautifully written. Lovely piece. =3
ReplyDeleteExcellent ending to this--and great use of the form. Thanks for sharing it tonight.
ReplyDeletebeautiful poem! *tears*
ReplyDeletethose last lines are so sad, bittersweet.
ReplyDeletenice.
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such deep pain
ReplyDeleteI'm always in awe of a poet who can express such emotion within the strictures of a form. And to do it so exquisitely as you have, Adam, just blows me away.
ReplyDeletethe ending was really tough...
ReplyDeleteSad, most certainly...but still freaking awesome! Love the killer finish, Adam...just fantastic!
ReplyDeleteThis is my favorite line: "Just pushed aside so I might soldier on."
ReplyDeleteWhat a painful piece.
love the simple rhymyes - goes beautifully with the heavy emotion.
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