So it's sharp edges would not cut;
People might see how much you care.
I wish you would soften. Your stare,
All fury, chops through anxious air,
Hotter, thicker, blacker than soot.
I wish you would soften your stare,
So it's sharp edges would not cut.
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ah there are people that can literally kill others with their eyes..nice triolet adam..
ReplyDeletethat was fun :)
ReplyDeleteActually-- this is terrific, Adam. The form serves you well in this instance! xxxj
ReplyDeleteVery nice! Reminds me of my cat's stare. Very nearly turns me into swiss cheese.
ReplyDeleteYeah, I know what its like to be on the receiving end of that lol. This was really well done :)
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